Why the Best Writing Advice Is Often the Weirdest
David O’Neill David O’Neill

Why the Best Writing Advice Is Often the Weirdest

Putting words on the page seems too low stakes to get worked up about, and yet the terror of saying something taboo—or just being boring—feels like a terrible fate to most writers. I see this every day as a writing coach, a job I’ve done since 2019, first teaching online classes and now mostly working with students one-on-one over Zoom. My task is to read their unpublished, often unfinished writing—less as a teacher or as an editor than as a cheerfully unlicensed therapist. I ask the writer to read their work aloud. They begin by delivering the words like an embarrassed waiter. About five minutes in, the writer’s voice steadies. They might cry, moved by their own words. They hear the false notes but also the truth of what they’re saying. It’s not “good,” not yet, but it’s a start. I ask questions, look for the story behind the story, and review sentence-level decisions. I watch for moments when the author is having fun.

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The Guest
David O’Neill David O’Neill

The Guest

My 4Columns review of Emma Cline’s novel.

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This Is No Dream
David O’Neill David O’Neill

This Is No Dream

The devil wears onesies: a look back at the birth of Rosemary’s Baby. My review from 4Columns.

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The Morning Star
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The Morning Star

The disquiet starts early in Karl Ove Knausgaard’s new thriller, The Morning Star. My review from 4Columns.

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Stay True
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Stay True

Friendship, tragedy, and coming-of-age in Hua Hsu’s debut memoir. My review from 4Columns.

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The Empathy Exam
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The Empathy Exam

My reporting for Artforum on a night with George Saunders at the New York Public Library.

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Political Theater
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Political Theater

The 2016 election in the photography of Mark Peterson. From the APR/MAY 2017 issue of Bookforum.

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Final Fantasy
David O’Neill David O’Neill

Final Fantasy

Maggie Nelson and Serial: How writers approach the unknowable. From the SUMMER 2016 issue of Bookforum.

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