Editing

At Bookforum, I’ve edited Jesse Barron, Moira Donegan, Johanna Fateman, Molly Fischer, Sheila Heti, Jamie Hood, Lauren Oyler, Charlotte Shane, Jeff Sharlet, Rachel Syme, Jennifer Wilson, Audrey Wollen, and Hannah Zeavin, among many other authors.

The examples here come from my work at Bookforum, but my editing services are open to freelance writers, essayists, and authors at any stage. Put my decades of experience to work on your draft.


Where Egos Dare
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Where Egos Dare

Hannah Zeavin on the secret history of a psychoanalytic cult.

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Radical Attention
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Radical Attention

Moira Donegan on pioneering therapist Judith Herman’s studies of trauma and justice. From the Summer 2023 issue of Bookforum.

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Corps Values
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Corps Values

A biography of George Balanchine shows the fragile contingency of genius. Siobhan Phillips in the DEC/JAN/FEB 2023 issue of Bookforum.

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Liz Kid
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Liz Kid

Charlie Tyson on Darryl Pinckney and Elizabeth Hardwick. From the SEP/OCT/NOV 2022 issue of Bookforum.

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Sticky Fictions
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Sticky Fictions

Tarpley Hitt on Kerry Howley’s nuanced portraits of whistleblowers and other deep-state dissidents. From Bookforum.com.

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Good as Hell
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Good as Hell

Johanna Fateman on the intoxicating gloom of Philippa Gregory’s historical fiction. From the SUMMER 2020 issue of Bookforum.

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She Drew the Hallelujah
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She Drew the Hallelujah

Rawiya Kameir on Daphne A. Brooks’s revelatory history of Black women artists. From the JUNE/JULY/AUG 2021 issue of Bookforum.

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A Heart Is Not a Nation
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A Heart Is Not a Nation

Confronting the age of hate in America. Jeff Sharlet in the DEC/JAN/FEB 2021 issue of Bookforum.

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LOOP Magazine, Issue 1
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LOOP Magazine, Issue 1

I was the associate editor for artist and musician Jason Moran’s Loop magazine, Issue 1.

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Editing: Pricing

You’ ll get the draft back in Google Docs or Microsoft Word with two levels of feedback: linelevel suggestions in the margins (word choice, sentence rhythm, voice) and big-picture comments (structure, argument, pacing). I recommend a separate coaching session afterward to go through the edits together (standard coaching rate, $140).

Initial read

Total estimate provided after this stage

$0.02

per word

Line edit

Range determined by manuscript needs

$0.04–0.06

per word